|Reviews for the imp impervious|
| bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
"schools of sharklings with hammer teeth and mermaid legs"- Awesome line! Great metaphors in this poem. Keep writing.
| Isca chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
"She can’t focus or fondle anything else with enthusiasm until she has this girl." Honest, relatable, and rather enjoyable to read. The final section is full of angst, which was a nice way to end the piece :)