I'm sad not now

WAHH! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO END THAT WAY THOUGH IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL WAY TO CONCLUDE IT. At first i thought that Oliver was really a jerk but at the end i started to like him and really didnt want him to die! I loved how he lied to her and he didn't actually molest her, and the fact that they became friends. This was a beautiful story and perfect ending. It was bitter and sad, but it was an amazing story to read. I really enjoyed it. Good work!

The. Ending. WHY. You should of had a twist where they were able to both live and marry.

This was amazing. Brilliant!

I really liked this and reading as Catherine fell in love was so sweet, even if it wasn't the happiest ending...

how could you kill Oliver? they were perfect together...

my name says it all

(except for the 03:))

wow wow wow

this is amazing!

That was a beautiful story. I really do think that sad endings are the best kind. it's more realistic.

Lots of Love,

Emi

omg omg thats terrible...

you rite realli well!

HE DIED...!-is pissed off- when that didn't end according to plan...technically it ended all good...TECHNICALLY...i hate you...:P

wow, this excellent story was published so long ago... and yet I'm only reading it now... 5 years later...Your way of spinning this story was magnificent. I would have prefered Oliver not dying, but it works well with the story. I was honestly crying by the end of this...well done.

What an excellent story. I was a true tear jerker.

Hmm... not the ending I would have wanted but it fit the story well. So Oliver died loving. This story is so tragic, but also very beautiful.

Great story

Wow, this is really good. Your writing is excellent, and the ending is so tragic amd unexpected.