|Reviews for The time stopped|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Review Marathon this weekend (link in my profile)!
This isn't your best piece. I do like some of the images you have like clock stopping, it works well. However, I think it was a bit repetitive and not in a good way. I also think it was a bit all over the place with the train of thought. I couldn't really follow the story. I might just work a bit on the piece and I'm sure it could be really great.
| Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
The clock has stopped?
I like that line, cuz its just really cool for some reason! Great poem!
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
A good poem. I like how you finished the sentence at the very end of the poem: The time stopped...When it was time to say goodbye.
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
As always, beautiful work. This is very good, nice work.