Reviews for I Wish
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
"Why is it that I can open up to a stranger, but not to you?"

Why is that?

One mistake here, "self-conscience" it should be self-conscious.

"It makes it too hard to talk to you.

I just can't start a conversation with you.

I use to be able to spontaneously talk to you

At random times about random things,

I just can't do that anymore."

Oh my God! Yes! I know what this feels like!

Another great piece :)
Autumn's Addiction chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
I really like this, probably because I can truly relate to it so well. It's almost weird, how it feels like these are kind of my own thoughts, but they obviously aren't :). Do you know what I mean?

I really like the line: "Why is it that I can open up to a stranger, but not to you?" I think we find it so much easier to tell things to people we don't know, because they can't really judge us for it. They can't leave us when they were never meant to stay... Okay, I'm just babbling now :)

I just wanted to say that I think this is a lovely poem, and I hope all goes well with you and him!