Reviews for Church Coffee Hour
Annie chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
*clap, clap *

"Choke back the truth before you're smothered"


I like this. I like this a lot.
slightly bitter this morning chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I feel sorry for the woman trying to be nice and take an interest in you that you just described as having claws.
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Das hört sich ja echt nach einer Mischung aus Wegelagerei und Inquisition an!

Mir gefällt wieder das alltägliche Thema, das macht dir hier niemand nach.
Cake Love chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
This is...enigmatic. I really want to know what's happening because it sounds really interesting! I love your imagery (the milk that they have at public gatherings does taste a lot like plastic, doesn't it?). You capture uncomfortable small talk really well.
farrahness chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
I can so relate to this. It's one of the reasons I stopped going to church. I'm actually very impressed that you described her hands as 'claws'. That's what I call them as well. The nails are always perfectly manicured and long and seem to dig into your skin as she smiles those fake denchers at you...Blegh. I'll pass on that experience.
SakuraLoveXox chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
your poem was well written, and i could picture the kid's uneasiness, lol. I know how he/she feels -.-