Reviews for Shadows
DraganMir chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
What to say other than it was a good poem? I like the metaphors in the first stanza, reminds me of a couple of my poems... but that is probably just me. The third stanza is probably my favorite, I like the image of walking on the sea. I also wonder who the 'we' are in the second line, there is no mention of anyone but the daemons. The description of the shadow with glowing eyes is detailed and eerie. The whole poem flows well, the rhythm is once again great. Great job over all!

Always looking forward to more,