Reviews for About the Car
Payton Alex10 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Again...AMAZING! Sometimes I feel the same way but LOL I can't drive or anything like that. Just TEEN PROBLEMS ova herr!
deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
:( this is sad. Or else it is sad, but less sad than I am interpreting it as. heh. Wishing... tis a strange thing that men do, but oh so powerful, for they are the only thing that when they dont come true that we notice them. I hope you feel better.
pixy dust and fairytales chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Great job, I love it. So well written.

Isca chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
"It's never been about the car." Wonderful last line-the deeper message is powerful. I think you should write another chapter to this or a sequel and continue with another look at what the speaker is really going through. :)
socks-lost chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
I really like the ending line. And how there is a deeper meaing behind the whole thing. The format is really good too. Awesome job! Keep it up!
Chidaruma Kamisori chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
I love your poetry even though I always feel so helpless after reading it.