Reviews for Torn
InspiredVisionary chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
It's sad. But it's still a good poem. Keep going, you've written so many poems here already. I find that poems keep me going. To just vent on my thoughts in pen. The feelings in this poem are so- REAL. I think I can relate to it.
Payton Alex10 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Wow! THis is really good...like, no joke! I can totally relate to this. You feel like your life is worthless and sucks and you just want to go crawl in a corner and die...but...you want someone there beside you that you love to make you feel better and not be only with yourself. LOVE IT!
deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
now thats not true. I can promise you I care (what that means to you, thats up to you to decide) and im sure that im not the only one. I like the paradox at the end "I don’t want to live anymore. But I don’t want to die alone." I have felt that way... a lot lol.
pixy dust and fairytales chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I care about you :) No lies. Wonderful piece, because it's real. It's raw and open. It's great.

Faith
Isca chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
"I don't ever want to wake up." The pain here is so sad!
socks-lost chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
It gets better. Keep writting!