I loved this. I've been looking to see if revolutionary slash exists. Very well done, but maybe some more romance would have been nice? I don't know though. I think it ended just fine.

Guh... guh... *faints*

OMG that was amazing.

*faints again*

... You just combined my two favorite things... The Revolutionary War and Slash. XD

This story is so very cute! It's very unique in the way it accomplishes it's goals, the requirements were seamlessly added to the story. No words stuck out awkwardly or sentences felt unneeded.

Also although I might not be a history buff it seems that you did a fair amount of research, I could tell you put some thought into the time.

The last point I have to make is that I absolutely love the theme. Something about forbidden requited love really appeals to me, just like Romeo and Juliet. However this story is significantly more awesome being both set in the revolutionary war and of course being slash. ;D

Thank you for writing such a well-written and meaningful story!

WHY DO U SUCK SO MUCH! DIS IS BETTER DEN THE OTHER 3 BUT IT'S STILL HORRIBLE! DO U EVEN KNOW ANYTHING BOUT US HISTORY THERE WERE NO FAGS THEN! WHY DO U SAY GAVINS SMART AND A LOYALIST THATS NOT POSSIBLE UR DUMB AND NOT REALLY AMERICAN! U PROBABLY WANT TO TAKE OVER THE CUNTRY BUT CANT CAUSE UR SO DUMB AND HAVE NO FRIENDS! UR FAG TEACHER SHUD BE FIRED!

I can't believe I didn't find this back in January... huh... anyway, my goodness! This is good :) I love history, it's awesome. So, therefore, this story is DOUBLEY awesome. Because it has history and hot guys. So. It wins. I don't know WHAT it wins, exactly, but it does. It's very good. I like it a lot.

Aww! I love Gavin. D:

Hahah. Admittedly, I'm bad at history and really don't remember much, but this story rings bells! Heh, John Hancock.

...I've always hated American history... It's so skewed. D:

...I want to know what happens next. Gwah.

I can't believe only one person reviewed this. Then again, January wasn't a very active month.

Wo.

This was amazing!

I was drawn in immediately; you're a very good writer.

:)