Reviews for insert beautiful boy's name here
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
poetry was meant to be personal,

and you express yourself very well.

lines like: "as nonexistent as my confidence" and "as cancerous as your effect on me." are very nice in describing how much of a hold this boy has over you.

but i have to say, the title is my favorite :)
unshattered chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Very well expressed, I felt the emotion in your writing.
SakuraLoveXox chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Very good use of similes, I especially liked the third section.

I would recommend you capitalize your sentences, but I figure that some poets have a certain style where they don't :)

Nice work with writing this, I enjoyed reading it :)

SakuraLoveXox