Reviews for four letter words
for shame chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
incredibly powerful.

especially the end.
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/5/2009

that ending...phenomenal, truly.

the comparison...

"we're both shells of what we used to be"

crazy good :)
bran4ever chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
This poem is almost... frighting in it ability to be captivating, abhorrent, and upsetting. It's very well written, though.

Your style of writing is very different from most. It's raw and blunt, yet leaves a lot to infer. I like it, even though it's sometimes depressing.

One thing, though, I don't understand the numbers in this pieces.

I do wish I could see your style put to something happy, anything.

Wonderful work, as always.