Reviews for Fragments, Partly
Lilja Ruusu chapter 2 . 2/17/2009
Don't think and find no reason

Don't cease and keep from freezing

Those were my favorite lines, I loved how they flowed and I LOVE rhyming!
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I liked it! it was unique, like a little bit different from everyone else who's all like: "My life sucks and no one loves me." Cool poem!
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Great writing! The rhythm of the lines really fits the anxiety in the words. It's pretty rare to find such balance in poetry. Keep writing! I really enjoyed this poem.