|Reviews for Mute|
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
there is something quiet in the nervous lipless eyes
that you don't get to see often
something you really miss and cannot place
that awkward time of youth
| paradise street chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Perfect. You really capture a sense of... velleity, I think is the word... wanting to act, to speak, but just /not/ doing it. There's a quiet, frustrated yearning in this that is really captivating. I also really liked "Nervous lipless eyes," - three words that say so much, so well. Kudos.