|Reviews for A World Without Mass|
| Elephant-Artist chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Pale hibiscus swaying/veil of dwindling. These are very strong words. These poems are really good. You are one of my favorite authors now. Good job. Please read and review my stuff.
| bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Absolutely beautiful. I love how you describe winter as a "viel." Keep up the awesome writing!
| paradisgatan chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Still at it, eh? I remember seeing you working with this form more than a year ago, I think. I'm glad you did because this was nice to read. Beauty in brevity, as always. Kudos for sticking with it!
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
This is very good. I like how you created such a beautiful image in only four lines. Nice work with this, I liked it.