Reviews for Just a Tad
renegade01 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
Aww... I feel like saying aww a gazillion times. That was beautifully long! I love it, the longer the better. *_
A Merry Savant chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
I like :D SWEET

Normally I don't like oneshots because they leave me with a cliffhanger. This one ended nicely and sweetly. I'm favoriting this one. :D
Tanoshimi chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
I like how I've read it all the way till the end and I like what you've written. Thanks, I've spend a great moment reading your story.
Jestry chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Aw, that was cute. I actually don't mind the length. It's short enough to read in one go, but long enough that you really get a sense of how the characters interact with each other. It's pretty nice.

Haha, I love Kea. She has a cool name, and she likes chocolate, and she's spazzy and weird. What more could you ask for? I really like how she freaked out and fell over when he kissed her. That was just so... real. I mean, it's not like they suddenly morph into passionate-love-confession-cliche-mode after they kissed. She freaked out, and it was awkward and real. I liked that.

I don't understand why she didn't hold any grudges for Melody though. I think I would be pretty upset, especially if said person already professed their love for me, and kissed me.

Anyway, I totally loved the Kea/Avery relationship. Bitches need friends too.

Keep writing!

Jestry
A.Cookie.For.A.Kiss chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
aw, I loved it, so sweet.

Really long one shot but so worth it!

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nomibear chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
Wow. I made it to the end! Whew. Haha, just kidding, I couldn't have stopped reading if a wild pack of Chihuahuas tried to gnaw off my leg! Even though you broke my heart a couple of times. T-T But I have to say: I absolutely adored Avery’s character! Bet you didn’t see that one coming. She was so evolved and fully fleshed out for the “villain”. I’d call it four dimensional. :D Not that I didn’t love Dale and Kea. And their slightly abusive KitKat throwing. And the humor, gosh, I almost fell out of my chair! XD Just some teeny suggestions: some closure with uglyboy, maybe Avery got rid of him or realized her true calling as a llama herder or fell in love? And I’d like to see Dale and Kea’s passions, volunteering or whatever. That’s it! Hope you’ve found or will find soon the incredible love [and chocolate] you write about!
SecretAgent99 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Oh my. Wow. WOW! THAT IS THE LONGEST ONESHOT I HAVE EVER READ! But it was amazing, and, and stuff like that. I loved it! And yeah, I'm just going to hit the favorites button now. *Favorites*
schvinn chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
dude awesome story! would've been sweet as a story with chapters, but it was just as good as a one shot - i really liked it :)
righthere431 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
ah adorable story!
brokeninfire chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
Oh my goodness! that is the best story i have ever read on fictionpress! there were a few mistakes, but who cares. you have a talent. a gift from god. if i could write like that, i'd scream for joy. Oh, and you just described my eating habits.
Aytheria chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Oh my. All I can say is that I wish this kind of thing would happen in real life (or if it does, then with more regularity)...and also...what are pods? o_O?

But brilliant. And it wasn't too long, really. I mean, damn, it was LONG, but it was a good kind of long. It was more a...novella than a short story. Bloody brilliant though. The characters were so real, they always are, and I just love that. Because that's what makes a story, I think. Every idea under the sun has been done already concerning romance, so it all boils down to how brightly you can paint your characters and how realistically you make them act, and how they CONNECT to the readers.

and there was some major connecting there...

:P

Loved it.

~Ria
singjoylalala chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
loved the ending :)
aly.LOVES.you chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
i LOVE kitkat.

and I love this ONE-SHOT!

:)
Tamashii Hime chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Cute fic!
NV12 chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
aw super cute!..and long...but loved it
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