maybe i'm totally stupid/oblivious, but for a while at the beginning, I thought Kea was a boy (plus you didn't use her name) and I was expecting the BFF hookup cliche, so that bit was a bit confusing, then I figured it out when Dale asked her out

other than that, funny story :)

I like your author's note...haha!

Anyway, this is a delightful story and, although I wanted to smack Avery around at some points, I'm very happy with the way you brought things to an end.

Were you referring to the RCM when you talked about the conservatory?

Keep on writing!

- Rebekah

That was just too adorable for words!

I LOVE the characterisation - Dale is a total sweetheart and Kea is hilarious (I can totally relate to her obsession with Kit Kats). The plot wasn't overly-cliche and the scenes with Dale and Kea just made me want to melt into my chair.

I just picked up on one of the lines: "I mean, really, for all I knew I could have fallen on my desk whilst studying" - I'm not sure but were you meant to write 'fallen asleep'? I'm probably wrong but I just thought I'd point that out.

Great oneshot! It was really well-written and nicely structured so it was easy to read and I didn't get bored and skip to the end [like I do with some stories "] Loved it! ]

AW!

I absolutely LOVED this story! I don't care if you think it's long or whatever, it's WONDERFULL!

I had a huge ole' grin on my face at the end.

Keep up the good work!

Aww... the story was so cute! It kinda reminded me of my own best friend who most of the time thinks that she's the only one being hurt when i'm obviously hurting too. But, i lurve her. :D

love this oneshot! really cute! and the whole kit kat bar thing...lol

Really, really good work :) I like the way you convey your characters emotions and the plot. Gotta adore Avery and Kae's friendship too. Very good work _

Yay...I just finished the longest one-shot ever! I feel so accomplished ;) Great job on this, I really loved it!

I LOVED IT! That has got to be the longest one-shot I've ever read. It was really Kute!

the quote at the beginning is by Leia Abramson. Love that poem. Cute one-shot. I lvoe the fact that it's longer.

this was pretty good...i'm still hoping you would finish writing 'brown eyes' :D

I finished it in one night! I didn;t want to stop. It was really good and well written. you didn't overdo descriptions and kept it at a regular moving pace that kept the reader interested.

Although extremely long...I did manage to get through that!

I loved the ending and I loved how you developed your characters.

You miss have got some real Talent )

I loved it. It's not soppy but it's sweet, in a nice way. it had me hooked right to the end. I like how you didn't make Avery out to be bitch at the beginning and let the reader start to notice how she's a bit self-involved, but then in the en dlove her anyway. Now i'm gpoing on with myself, so yeah it was a good read.

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these are all so cute

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