Wowza. That was a long oneshot. EPIC!

Dale, dale, dale. Mhm... *drool*

What's with Kea and chocolate? LOL

Ima lovin' this!

OMG, that was probably the longest oneshot I have EVER read but it was definitely worth it. When I ended, I literally screamed because I finished, for one, and because the ending was just HUGE SMILE-inducing. Anyways, I loved the twists and turns, Kee's character (I love how she's Asian, XD. I'm biased; Asian, too, you see) and Avery's eventual change. And, of course, Dale. :D

-squeal- Dale, what to type about him... he's just the awesomest boyfriend ever, on the face of Kee's world, I bet. hahaha, if I ever had the time, I'd SO read this over again.

I cried (seriously, that was an awesome scene, very tear-inducing), I laughed, I squealed, I screamed, and I just freaking L-O-V-E-D this story!

-toffeecakesxox.

I loved it!

Ok so I hardly ever do reviews but this one shot was so cute! I read through it so quick I think it wasn't long enough lol. Just wanted to let you know its great

This is soo cute!And the whole kit kat bar thing was adorable!

love it!

This isn't a one shot, this is a... a... saga (?).

But REALLY well done. Holy crap, well done. I just had to read it all in one, twenty-minute long go, and now my eyes hurt.

So thanks for that, and you know, the amazing story part. :)

-Kaylee

wow, that was a long I loved it, she's so cute!

Aw.

I love your one-shots!

:)

oh god.

that was the longest thing of my life.

but it was so amazing i couldnt stop reading

maybe i was a tad slow on the reading, but your writing.

amazing! i couldnt commend you any-less. this was well thought out(OBVIOUSLY)

but it was great.

Barring the fact that it took me three days to get through this (I've got an infant) it was really good, and really cute in a sort of cliched not kinda so really sort of way, and I really don't know what I just said, but I liked it. So let's just leave it at that.

AH! I'm in luv! Like, this is auw-some! its almost a cliche, but still super original and keeps you handing on

VERY long, but worth it in the end. :)

Oh. My. God. That was about one of the best one shots I have read in too long a time. Both heart wrenching and hilarious. It made me want to cry and laugh. Very, very, VERY quality stuff. Just watch out for spelling and grammar. Those bastards can trip a person up. Otherwise, keep on going.

And I will now mosey on to read your other stories. Because this one gave me so much happy. :)

I love your author's note! Hahahaha! LOL. I love this story! OMG! A LONG one-shot but REALLY REALLY great. :) I love how original the characters were. Hahahaha. Thanks for writing this! Already skipping so much studying for this-Be thankful I even read and reviewed! Hahahaha! I'm just kidding! Would rather have read it(even if I end up cramming ;)) than not at all. :) Brilliant. Sorry if the review's a little messed up and crazy. My brain cells are getting fired. This week in school's so utterly hectic. : But anyhow, thanks again for writing this epic one shot!

wow! that was such a great story!

what happened to avery and joel?