Awwww... Loved it!
Megan :)

Hi there! It's Melissa from ADoR. Just a Tad has been added to the site under the One-Shot category. Here's your review:

Melissa Thinks: This is the longest one-shot I've ever read in my entire life. You think I'm kidding, but wait until you read it. Kea lives in the shadow of her controlling, selfish best friend Avery. Avery always gets what she wants, including boys who seem to kiss the very ground she walks on. Then we have Dale, an ex-boyfriend of Avery's who wants her back and so he enlists the help of Kea. He plans to fake date Kea in order to make his ex jealous, however Kea has a secret. She's in love with Dale and watching him try to crawl back into the arms of her best friend just might be the thing that breaks her.

At first, the length of this obviously was intimidating to me. I thought there was no way in hell I was gonna finish this. Then I started reading and my perspective shifted. The length is no problem once you get sucked into Kea's story (which happens within the first five minutes of reading, I assure you). xoxluurve created a unique little bunch of characters. For example, Avery is no angel although around others she seems to be. She's actually kind of a bitch, but in the end you can see a clear change in her and it seems her's and Kea's friendship is stronger than ever. The writing was of course wonderful as is expected of xoxluurve (what a legend). The dialogue was so cute and funny; a real joy to read. And who can forget Kea and Dale, our main couple? Absolutely adorable. I cherished every single scene between them. It may be a tad lengthy, but that just makes it even more satisfying to reach the end.

*sigh* that was such a feel-good story! :))
They were SOOOOOO cute together! :)

3 this story! :)

I liked this story just a tad bit ;)

Oh, Avery.

Lemme just say, I adorreee Dale and Kea, but the person I love most in this short novelette is Avery. She's selfish, she's a bitch and yet she's my favorite character. She's kindhearted and she's protective of her friend, and she plays dirty. She gave the "You swore on our friendship!" card and that went too far.

But she's imperfect, and that's why I love her so much. She doesn't take any shit and although she's not the best role model, she is definitely brave. And then she changed for her friend. She didn't really, really change, but she changed out of the love for her friend and I guess that's why I love her so much. So bravo for that amazing character in the crew of your spectacular characters.

wow. he's like a chocolate bar vending machine. wanna have a guy like that.

thought it was amazing and so romantic loved it great quick read cograts

This was amazing and absolutely beautifully written. I completely fell head over heels for Dale in this and I found myself laughing along to their banter. Okay, onto your next story! (I'm actually not kidding, I think I'm addicted to your writing) Congratulations on creating another beautiful read!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I think I just died a little inside.

I'm smiling like an idiot and everything.

Love this story and it was a really good read.

Lol! You're a great writer, that's for sure. XP This is my favourite story of yours! I really don't know why...

I love super long one-shots, and I most certainly love this one XD

yay:):) i3 happy endings:)

I can't believe I finished this in two hours and a half, and stayed up until one in the morning. But seriously, I can't stop reading it, obviously hooked up.

I didn't like Avery at first, but in the end, I guess she's changed a lot. Haha. Still, it's lovely~

okay, that was friggin' adorable. )