Reviews for Just a Tad
Bipolarised chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
really funny and inspirational, great work!
codeblue92 chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
aw this was cute. I love the whole kit kat bar thing :P
Hehehehah chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Aw...that's a cute story. Love the main characters.
ZaraRose.16 chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
I swear I reviwed this before but I just wanted to be the 200th xD I've read this five times now!
blithe.serendipity chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
This was probably one of the cutest one-shot's I've ever read. The kit kats were a nice touch and I really liked the main characters ignorance and self-doubt, you wrote it well so it was relatable.

Thanks for writing
SometimesG chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I love it ! He certainly knows what she likes... you made them very lovable and very down to heart. Like the best friend aspect of the story too!
lukas10 chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Now i'm craving for kit kat..! :)
bridgettblah chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Haha AW this is so friggin cute! .
michellemybelle chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
OMG BEAST WIN SCORE. I LOVE YOU. I can now die happily. :] This fic just made me so happy, you have no idea. You're so talented. (heart)
Gracelin chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
That was so nicely written. And you're right, I didn't even notice it was that long until I delved into it, which, was making a commitment of sorts because then I HAD to know how they end up together. I loved loved loved Kea's food obsession and how Dale always has candy bars for her. I also really liked how the characters were so developed. It felt like the story was more about the best friends than Dale x Kea, and honestly, that really struck a chord with me, since I sort of had this falling out with my best friend over the "you take advantage of me and sit and cry and complain about how it's everyone else's fault"...thing, haha. Only difference is that we don't really talk, thought a part of me wishes we ended up like Avery and Kea. I guess basically, all I'm saying is good job, and your writing is great. :)
andykhu chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
i've come across this story a number of times but never took the time to read it and ah i'm just so glad that i finally did :) it's so sweet and well-written and ah this is just such a good one :) great job!
lindallama chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
AW now im craving kit kat bars...
joe chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
sew purr nice :)

made me feel happy all over
thisturbulanceisbeautiful chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
wow that was some reading i had to do there LOL

that could easily be a short story yano xD

but yeah it was actually amazing, i loved it ._.

your such a good writer!

ive read practically all your stories now ;D

but yeah really good job .
Josella chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Hello.

I love this.

Very much.

Actually, I love everything you write.

Very much.

That's all.

XD
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