Hey everyone! I'm going to do a story based off of a song, so please, PM me and tell me what song you want me to do ( Athenacat). Pass this to other people!Thank you!

I loved this story, it was amazingly written.

I absolutely adore your stories. I hope you will continue them soon!

Hilarious ending! This was sweet throughout, though Jack was a dickhead for a while there. Short and sweet, great job!

since Ive been on this site... Im gonna count about 4 days... your stories are the only ones to have me cracking up out loud. I wish I could be funny in my writing but I dont think its possible. Its a special thing to be able to make someone laugh. the characters were all lovable and funny and clever. I loved this.. a lot. *still super jealous*

Your story was so awesome and a joy to read. I don't think that I can look at winter time, or a Thanksgiving Turkey for that matter, the same way I did before. I absolutely loved Rudy by the way! 3

If I was lesbian I would totally marry you...AWKS. Im in love with your style and how you portrayed Rudy. Seriously, I died laughing and my mom thought I was on crack or something. Anyway, (Rudy kind of hates him.) was definitely one of my favorite lines. The plot is amazing. I mean, Snood was the best. Hes by far my favorite character that youve created and if I wasnt in love with you, Id totally marry him. Just saying. The story is funny, its well developed and well-written. The present tense, first person slash occasional third person technique was perfect for this story and Im really impressed. The tone and pacing of this story is exactly how I like it.

I just had some issues with Esther. I mean she's like, barely mentioned throughout the story but, she's used as bait for Rudy and it seems she should be more of an integral part of the story because I didn't buy it.

("Man," Rudy says later over dessert, after he thinks about it for a while. "I could have been getting laid when I was fifteen. Thanks for totally cockblocking me with that hot guy, dad. Really. Awesome job." ) This was hilarious and I love how much this section lets you know about Santa and Rudy. All in all, this is a fantastical read and has everything anyone could ever hope for- slashy goodness, humor, love, Christmas, turkeys, and balls.

Also, I have a confession. I've re-read this story seven times. It's like I enjoy it more and more every time I read it. It's got to be magic.

i love it. i kinda want to make this a christmas tradition of reading this story. so many hilarious lines. but i do love, "i'm not a holiday. I'm an archetype."

brilliant! thanks for sharing!

Aww, that was quite cute.

I admit, I've come across this story a couple of times and skipped it. But now I wished I hadn't because I would of had a lot of laughs earlier on in my life. Everything here was so funny! The dialogues, situation, plot. Gosh. I love holidays!

You have a very dirty mind (take it as a compliment) :D

Very well done. It'll make it so that I never see Christmas in the same way again.

What a wonderful story :)

best holiday story i've ever read! it makes me feel warm and christmasy even though christmas isnt for ages. brilliantly written, i loved every character and how you described them in relation to thier holiday. thank you for writing this it was so fun to read!

rolf, santa's balls ! that was so funny - !

Perfect story for the holidays. I know I will never think of dear Jack the same way again, lmao.

I love this! Very well-written. It was a perfect ending but I'd love to read how their live progressed after that, lol. :)