THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL I LOVE YOU.

Aw I love this story, i found it touching. I especially liked the part when Rudy just wants to get fat and grow a beard.

Just to let you know, I'm going to read this every Christmas for the rest of my life. :P

"'Promise me something,' Jack says, and rolls them around so his chin is propped on Rudy's chest and his fingers can trace small patterns on Rudy's bare stomach."

"'Hm?'"

"'Don't get fat like your father.'"

"'What?' Rudy squawks, leaning up on his elbows to glare down at Jack's head."

"'I don't want to have sex with a bowlful of jelly for the rest of my immortal life.'"

"'Seriously,' Rudy says, flopping back. 'I hate you.'"

LAWL

I JUST READ THIS LIKE 4 TIMES. I think I am in love with your writing. The interaction between Rudy and Jack is so cute and adorable whoaomg, this made me melt and lose my coherence. Please, write more!

I really love ur stories! FrankInLove is my favorite _

You have a very cool view on old "fantasy" stories. Hope you continue writing!

this story just made my day. you're an awesome writer with a great imagination and all your story are a trip to read.

i seriously love you! write more

oh my god you brilliant brilliant person if i had a dick it would be so hard right now. i love this story, it was the freaking best.

Oh god. Definitely the best holiday story ever.

I was seriously dissolving into fits of giggles throughout the entire story. The dialogue killed me, Rudy killed me, Santa's balls killed me. All these little hilarious details to make up the funniest thing I've read in a long time.

(ALSO THE SEX WAS HOT. YEAH JACK, SHOW WHAT YOU CAN DO WITH A CANDY CANE!)

Another great work! I loved this one too! You'r a wonderful writer.

Shit, can you ever write a bad story? I LOVED the elfs by the way, exactly how I imagined them to be.

gosh, this was genius!

Woh... I love this Holidayland/Monster town you've created. I can't get enough but I have run out of your stories to read D

So so awesome in so so many ways. :]