Reviews for Best Friends? Something more?
crazed-by-nature chapter 2 . 12/29/2009
omg she kissed him? gasp and shockadoodles. but i mean who wouldnt? if you had a hot (?) guy just mere inches away from you. mhm. anyway it was so cute i ant wait for more . XD
crazed-by-nature chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
i love nate. he seems so cute and sweet.

Woah! That was deep i felt sorry for her when she was talking to her mom about her dad.

anyhoo i love the chapter and i cant wait for more...
chocolatecaramel chapter 2 . 2/27/2009
Well, hi...

Hahahaha. Nate is SO gay on the Chester part!

You might want to proofread this one a little more. I just found some minor typos and some misused prepositions...

Anyway, good luck with your story. :)
heyandie chapter 2 . 2/27/2009
Casey! :)

It's really nice. :)

I'm excited to read more. x)

K,bye. :D
russetwolflover chapter 2 . 2/26/2009

I thought that he she, whatever I ain't spoiling!

I need you, to UPDATE!

Thank you.:)
awillowdeeplyscarred chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Hmm...It was a good start, set up relationships and such. Excited to hear what happens next and if she ends up shopping with her dad! but maybe add more descriptions of the setting and what they all look like. and maybe go into more detail about the relationship between her mom and her dad, like a flashback or something. if thats what you want to do. just suggestions

great job :)

x lauren
Spurlunk chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Hmm. Well you have some minor problems, like changing tense a lot, and switching from narration to thoughts kind of quickly. Maybe you want to italicize the parts that your main character is thinking? I don't know, just a suggestion. The plot itself seems okay so far, pretty ordinary, nothing out of the blue, but I'm assuming you've got something in mind and it'll pick up soon. Nice job so far. )
russetwolflover chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Casey, Wuvs!

God that just made me sound like some one.

Hint hint.

I've read this.

Last year.:

I know what'll happen next!


I love it.:X

I missed you today.:((

Stupid practices.


-Gossip Girl.:))
lettucebehappy chapter 1 . 2/2/2009

Yay, first review!

Anyway, this is amazing, wonderful, fantastic. Something I would actually read ... in a book. :P

I'm knocked up. AND KIDDING. :)

I can't wait 'till the next chapter.

I WILL borrow you in school tomorrow. Call me a bastard. :)

Hah, I'm kidding again.


-You know who I am. ;)