Reviews for Operation: Eliminate Elites |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this was such a great story! awesome job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first few chapters were HILARIOUS! LOVED loved LOVED the interactions between Amber and Alec, made me laugh out loud. :) But I think you did rush the romance, quite a bit. She goes from hating his guts to really really suddenly crushing majorly on him. I kind of thought 'what? Did I skip a chapter?' I would have loved for the rivalry to continue for a while longer! But I really liked the whole 'upstage the clones' plot that ran alongside of this, it was great fun, although I think you could have had a bit more fun with it! Maybe stretched it out a bit, to make the interactions with Alec last longer too! But great job! your_critic |
![]() ![]() good story surprised me think u deserve more reviews |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Cassandra’s face lit with reorganization" - do you mean recognition? |
![]() ![]() ![]() O, great first chapter. It really brought me in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was incredible! cheesy but amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed that, I'm glad they made up in the end but I think I would have prefered to see more of Alec and how they got together properly, apart from that it was awesum! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw Alec is still a bit of a ass but he's so sweet, and I cant belive she hurt herself! Surely they wont do the cheer off now? She has to be exused, aw I gotta go to sleep now and I really want to know what happens :( will rcomence tomorrow XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love ! Love ! Love ! Alec and Jared are so cute! She's a bit dence but super sweet none the less XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kind of wanted her to just say dont throw her off the team for ever, but you know still have her punished, now I'll be biting my nails to see if she gets kicked out of school, ek! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The best chapter by far! Yay yay yay yay yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah she is so evil, I hope they do well.# |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! Alec is growing on me, but seriously, I agree with Amber, why dose he have to be such a jerk, oh it would be great if he became nice because of her. Guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the fact that you did do more Alec an Jared, lookforward to seeing more of them :) |