wow...a little intensity there...cool

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awesome...I really wanna read chapter four. I also feel the same way about dying. I am not afraid to die because I know that I am going to heaven, but I would be scared of what I would be leaving behind.

C: Keep Writing!

this seems interesting i would like to see where you take it :D update soon

hm, interesting...I will let you know what I think of the story when I get to read more...