Reviews for We are still there
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Review Marathon this weekend (link in my profile)!

"Like a black white movie."... black and white

I like the idea that though you guys are still physically together the things that made you a couple no longer are. That was a really great statement because it was so true and you illustrated it well with good examples.

Your similies are great and I like how you repeated the format. It worked well with the piece.
Isca chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
"We are still there...like an abstract art." Brilliant! Striking! Powerful!
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
The sky that isn't blue anymore,

the rose that isn't red anymore,

We are still there...

Like a black white movie.

That was my favorite verse, i think i know what it means, it's beautiful! Really cool idea!
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Wann gründest du endlich eine Band? Ich höre den Song richtig in meinem inneren Ohr