|Reviews for When Night is Almost Done|
| fnicolette chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Oh...I see you took most of your stories down :( did you ever get to publishing it? You sound so much more successful than I ever thought you were. ML fans are lucky to have you :)
| thepalechick chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
For some reason this story came to mind today, I'm really not sure why. I pulled it up and though I knew it was gone, I couldn't remember if I had ever commented and told you just how much I was enjoying it. After looking through the reviews, I was sad to see that I did not.
While I truly enjoyed all your stories...fictionpress, adultfanfiction, and your blogspot site (which I checked more often than I care to admit)...this story was something special and really pulled me in. Your descriptions were so hauntingly beautiful and I just loved how unique and intriguing each of these characters were. Beth was utterly bewitching and I was looking forward to seeing her grow. Plus the mystery surrounding the house and family was a huge draw.
So better late than never...I feel that this story was among your best work and truly hope that you have been continuing it behind the scenes. I have no doubt that it is publishable. I'm a huge reader and I always judge books by how memorable they are. So the fact that this story and characters still cross my mind, even though it has been down for months, makes it a worthy read. Great job!
Since I'm not sure if you still check reviews here, I plan to hop over to you livejournal and leave a similar message.
| Kira chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Aw i was really excited for this story but I understand. Plagiarism has been such a problem on this site. You should try making a livejournal account that only ppl you approve can see like other fictionpress writers have done if you want to keep sharing your stories. Either way, I'l miss reading it!
| xlovexpollutionx chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
ugh, I'm really getting fed-up with these plagiarizers. They've been attacking everyone and it's just so stupid. Maybe it's just me but I've always been taught that people who plagiarize basically get sent to the lowest depths of hell. I just don't understand these people. I'm sorry that you got plagiarized and I really hope you get published.
I understand why you're taking this down and everything, but I'm still upset that I can't finish it. Everything was going so well! Pooh. Good luck on getting your things published! I'll buy them!
| Angelfeet chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
*Calm Breaths Calm Breaths* They just! kissed...and now its taken away :'( WHY...When it does get published send me a message and ill be one of the 1st buys. im loving this story!
| Twist Their Emotions chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
ANOTHER ONE. GOD. I hate plagiarism.
| xlovexpollutionx chapter 7 . 6/3/2009
This story has an interesting plot and pretty good characters. Beth kind of frustrates me-I know I'd be like "HEY! WHAT'S UP WITH YOU AND YOUR CRAZY SECRET? TOUCH ME ALREADY!"-but I understand that it's just the way she's been raised and her personality and the times. I'm intrigued by the crazy ghost, too. I'm thinking perhaps Elizabeth a sister who died? In some violent manner? Haha I don't know. Just a guess.
Really, my only problem with your story is that there are some grammatical lapses scattered throughout and that sometimes the dialogue doesn't seem natural (I don't really know what this means, and I don't know how to write dialogue perfectly at all, and it might just be the era...I've never read anything else of yours so I can't say if you're really at fault here). All of that's minimal though and I find myself enjoying the story no matter what! Please update soon!
| Dorkified and Lovely chapter 7 . 5/19/2009
oh my god. how could you just LEAVE IT AT THAT? do you even KNOW what I'm suffering here? It's fantastic, of course, and he just KISSED HER and then the chapter is OVER and you haven't updated in- gah! pleasee update as soon as humanly possible! I'll love you for longer than forever!
| GoddessofChocolate chapter 7 . 5/14/2009
Please, please, please write an other chapter soon.
| mika chapter 7 . 5/12/2009
OMG update please! This is an amazing story with such an interesting plot!
Oh I feel so sorry for Beth - I wish Sam would just open his eyes and see how wonderful she is! He is seriously blind. And I can't believe he thought he didn't have to explain himself to her in relation to the whole Amanda saga...um hello SHE'S YOUR WIFE for cripes sake. You know the scene where they're sitting at the dinner table on the night of their marriage, I could so easily imagine them sitting miles apart and that completely suffocating awkwardness. I hope so much that Sam will actually attempt to let her into to his life - they could be so good together if only he wasn't so daft!
| Caryn chapter 7 . 5/10/2009
I love this story so much! I keep rereading it, hoping i can get more clues about what is going on in that house!
Please update soon! Im dying!
| SassyGrl chapter 7 . 5/3/2009
| mary mary chapter 7 . 4/29/2009
wow! this is amazing! I loved your flower girl/soldier boy series I'm sure I'm going to love this too. Please update soon! I can't wait to find out about the Chapman house and the many secrets Sam is hiding.
| Sui Juris chapter 7 . 4/29/2009
What the hell is going on in that house!
Anyway i just love it!
I love it!
Cant wait for the update!
| cerulean sea chapter 7 . 4/20/2009
I'm so glad I found this story. It's so addicting! There's mystery and everything, but Sam and Beth have all that sexual tension between them too. :) Can't wait for your next update!