Reviews for Icy Secrets |
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![]() ![]() ![]() such a good story i stayed up all night reading it, currently 8:00 in the morning here in Australia haha.. thanks for the story appreciated alot it was really interesting and very unique! cant wait for more, if your doing more! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soo... her name is Anna? or Scarlett? |
![]() ![]() I have to say this chapter and moment when Jake was singing the song it made me very emotional (also because listening to that song while reading it) and thinking that he could leave...I want them get together...perfect song to pick also...still hoping they get together...love the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait im confused did they get back together or not and do they ever see each other again i mean you could have written a few more chapters about him deciding weather he wanted her or not like going to the air port to stop her or if he missed her he would get the first flight to see her again or something like that. But does Ryan go to see her that summer with brook and does Hayden go with him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well your silly cause I loved this chapter at times it was slow but all in all I still loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Its very beautiful chapter and i love it :) Please don't take those stories down and i really love this story so don't let anyone copy your stories because you are amazing writer and no i don't think this story is crappy :) How old are Aaron, Anne, Blake, Brittany, Kimmy and Jake? How does Anne, Jake, Kimmy, Brittany and Blake become best friends? Awww... Aaron is like a brother to Anne and Brittany. How cute :) OMG! I don't understand why Anne can't stay with Aaron while her parents are gone on business trip. :S ITS AMAZING CHAPTER AND I AM ENJOY READ THIS CHAPTER. I LOVE IT AND I'LL READ THE REST OF THIS STORY TOMORROW :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really awesome! With your lucid descriptions, good use of grammar, and uncanny ability to capture everyone's perspective easily in each chapter, it was very nearly irresistible. Once I started reading, I was sucked in - I had to read the whole thing to get that 'fulfilled' feeling. It was great, but I hope that perhaps you could do one more chapter to see who caves...or maybe even two, so that you could 'fast-forward' to the summer time and see how they're all doing. Anna'll be at home by then, obviously, and Hayden and Ryan should probably be down in LA. I hope that they'd move out there...that way, Hayden and Anna could still have a chance of being together. I'm really rooting for them! Amazingly well done. This is most definitely going to be added to my favorites. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() is her name scarlet or anna? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ryan was soo sneaky hahaha man im saddened that the story is over but happy about the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() its a bit shady that scar has been hogging everyone away from hayden and plus she is taking them back to cali |
![]() ![]() ![]() my guess was wrong oh well hayden dont rush to conclusions! i thought the chapter was good it would have been great if it would have been a little longer and there would have been more info on where hayde n ryans mom & stay and whos is the "slight blemish in it…" that hayden didnt want to think about? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i get the feeling that the guy who did scars hair is going to leak the whole boyfriend thing and the media is going to think its jake and thats how hayden is going to find out the truth about her thats just a guess lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice song selection hahaha now i want to dance |
![]() ![]() ![]() how long has she been there? i cant help but think what will happen when she goes back to bev hills... [ put hayden in suit case and take him XD |