|Reviews for Test|
| queen-of-the-sand-castle chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
Ah, this is what runs through my head every Friday morning because my math teacher adores giving us tests...on FRIDAYS.
Watch, next time I'm taking a test I will be reciting this to myself. :) Excellent poem!
| Phantasmagoria Land chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
To me, this sounds more like a sort of rap song rather than poetry, especially with the repetitive lines. However, I can relate to it and the fact of how your mind can wander away during a test to something completely irrelevant (happens to me every time). I do think the line "my sister's a pest" is kind of random, unless that was the point of it?
Otherwise good job, keep it up!