Reviews for Kelsy's Short Story
moonlitedrift chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
im da author of What Are You. these kind of stories make me cry. i cried. ive post 3 chapters since da last one u reviewed
haley chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
omg! sad but moving omg! wow u are a really good a writter u inspire me i big sis by ;ike one month
sekangel88 chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
You know there was actually a two year old Meeker girl in Oklahoma named Kelsey that was murdered from child abuse
lymli chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
aw, the ending is tearful and sad but nice.
Classychik chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
short but cute, I like it. the little girl is so adorable, I love the short but powerful message you sent through this. awesomness!

ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
That is so sad :( But so extremely touching
Rain at Dusk chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
aw, she's so innocent. I like how it ended with her thinking she's a little star. so adorable! this sounds kind of familiar in a way. did you base it on something you read?
Kristen Wallen chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
This is so cute! But it's really sad. The kid who's narrating it seems really cute. I don't know why her father would be so damn mean to such a cutie! Great story! You should write more like this! Do u want me to edit it?