|Reviews for Trembling Devotion|
| Aistaraina chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
A few spelling mistakes such as agin when I think you meant again. I find this story of your's interesting but I still think you should make it longer.
Also this sentence "She hoped Issabelle and her family were gasped as her arm throbbed agin, making her head spin" confuses me. Are you trying to have the second part of the sentence interrupt her thought, the beginning of the sentence?
| Chu-Chi Bear chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Umm ... i'm not sure what to think yet. There's not really much to go off of since it was so short. BUT I WILL WAIT PATIENTLY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! lol
"Lana woke u, her head was throbbing and so was her left arm." Just something small, i think you meant up, right?
The multipule please's did me in, so i had to review lol.