First story huh? Pretty good Sofia.

Hey! I really like this story of yours! I really like the twist of the mythical creatures and everything in such a normal human setting. Although, I think I would have liked it better if only Tawny knew about the mythical creatures. But anywho, I really like the characters so far. Oh for the 3rd chapter at the beginning with Jay's POV (point of view), it got kinda long with such a big recap of what already happened. I know that it's different because it's Jay, but it didn't have enough new stuff to keep it interesting. I'm all for the recap in different POV's but just be carefull not to over do it. Overall good story! Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

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btw love that story

Wow I love the part where jay hugged her! XP It was so cute. He ended up stngling her. Anyways nice plot. Pegasi are cool :) BTW thanx for reviewing mine! I thought nobody would. You're a very nice person. Keep up the good work! I'll be waiting for your next chapter. Oh and check out Emi's story: Half-Human. Its awesome :] I talk a lot don't I XD

Have a great life free from problems! :)