Reviews for Lies
Belladonna Snow chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Harsh and strait to the point, but oh so beautiful. Bravo, that was very well done.
Vernelley chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Wow, great poem.

Perfect way of conveying how only part of one's self is shown to others while the other part remains hidden. It's good for the Hurt/Comfort genre. You're an excellent poet. Wonderful!
Anise Cary chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Wow seems an inadequate word, you write such powerful poetry. It's always a joy to read. I can picture the happy person completely as I can picture the wounded one. Two halves of a whole. I've known people like this. I feel for this person. excellent job
IfWeWereInLove chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
I really like this poem. It shows how much there can beneath someone who seems like another. ]

Somehow, I can relate. It has a nice repetition and keeps a flow going through the poem.

Keep writing!
Lee Daniel chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Oh my god, I don't know if I can take it to read your poems. They reach right into me and rip my heart out. It is like you were standing beside me while I went through some of my worst moments and penned them down perfectly. Once again, you have captured perfection.
HoldingRunaways chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Amazing... Simply amazing. I love it! Sounds much like me. Adding to favs