I feel like crying...TT

wonderful :)

Ri

oh my god, man. I like, don't really know what to say. Don't get me wrong, this was amazing, but it's just one of those things that you read, and your just sitting there afterwords going like.. oh.. um. Wow. :)

This was really well-written, and.. so, interesting. I really don't know, but I really liked it, a lot.

It wasn't cute. It wasn't sweet. It just was. I liked it. It was nice. It remembered the boy and showed how the girl was dealing.

aw... i really wanted Danny to pop out of nowhere there... beautiful!

Oh my gosh. I'm freaking crying. Thanks a lot.

But really, that was just...I don't know. All I know now is that I have a runny nose.

That was very touching.

Great job.

okay, u are an amazing writer! keep writing!

Wow, I feel kind of depressed now. That was sad, and very, very well written. I think that, thats the truth a lot of people face when someone dies at school, a lot of people don't know really how to react. Its just kind of shocking and well, it doesn't seem like it really happened. anyways, loved it, even though it was really sad to read:) Poor Danny...

Ohh man, I really like this!

It's crazy to think that at any moment someone you know (who might be someone you hate, who copies you, etc.) could die, and that's it.

Keep writing!

Wow. That was beautiful. I applaud you. You did awesome with this. I'm sorry about the loss of Danny. :( Keep up the great work.

A boy in my school just passed away in a car accident a week and a half ago. I didn't know him that well, (he was 2 years older than me) but he did live close to my neighborhood. I was definitely in the narrator's group of "the few of us who don't really know how to react." I identified with the character in this story and the story in general more than I have with most other books. This was a really powerful story.

It was an interesting perspective, the way you wrote it. I rather like the way you wrote the two significant characters (Danny and the Narrator). They both seem very real, fleshed out people, which is surprising because you don't expect a short story to have good characterization. But it does, and it's a testament to your writing skills that it does.

I now understand why your story has 93 reviews so far prior to mine. It's well-written, and quite original, and probably one of the most impressive works on (at least in the YA genre).

Take care, and keep up with the excellent writing! ;)

wow. this is one of the best stories i ever read. thanks for sharing it with the rest of the world, and i hope u continue your works. thanks again :)

Wow. Simply breathtaking. Sad and funny at the same time. The ending was simply... I don't know how to describe it, but it's perfect. Keep on writing!