|Reviews for Ran away|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Review Marathon this weekend (link in my profile)!
"were your tears or were your tears?"... that didn't make sense to me at all
"no matter if it's sad or sad."... sad or sad? Again I don't get it.
"and you body stayed here,"...your
"the clouds were like shattered glass,"... I really like that line. powerful image.
"there wasn't piece to complete that puzzle"... a piece
I like this piece a lot. It's very bittersweet and well done. I think you used repetition nicely and the whole candy thing was really great as well.
| Isca chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
"Though you were naked, a thousand stars." The imagery here is creative, sad, amd beautiful. Nice word-choice too.
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Gut geschrieben, aber sehr, sehr traurig und dann noch Family? Ich hoffe, es ist nicht autobiogaphisch?
| Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
That's why I ran away, I ran away...
I liked that line, and how it repeated throughout, with a little different wording every time...Beautiful!