| Reviews for The day I ruled the world |
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   gabijaluvs2rite chapter 1 . 2/16/2009 It's good, but you need to work on your punctuation and grouping your sentences. |
| Reviews for The day I ruled the world |
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| gabijaluvs2rite chapter 1 . 2/16/2009 It's good, but you need to work on your punctuation and grouping your sentences. |