Wow, that was really sappy. You hit it right on the spot. But if you really like this girl, then you should tell her. I know this review may not be very helpful, since I'm a year late for any kind of input on the matter, but you shouldn't wait to tell her. I used to have this crush and I waited for 3 years to get the guts to tell her that I liked her. Of course by then I was really clcose friends with her and decided that I would rather be friends than ask her out but... I'm not helping am I? Whatever, do whatever you think is right, but you can count this as a positive review. :)

This was sappy, but not in a bad way! It was very cute, actually.

I love the way you repeated the line "She was Summer." You made her seem almost like a goddess in comparison. Great job!

Aw, that was sweet _

Wow, that was superbly written. I think it's obvious that you have true and sincere feelings for this girl; she's very lucky. And as far as you waiting for 10 positive reviews until you tell her, don't even bother. This is an excellent piece where you've laid out all of your feelings on the table. Go for it! And good luck!

And again, your writing truly deserves much praise. :D

~thexwayxtoxgoodbye

Aw, that was sweet.

Well written and you can really tell you like her.

But, being a girl, I have to give you advice.

Are you guys friends? Or is this crush from a far, and you haven't really talked to her before? Or do you occasionally talk?

Because, well, there's nothing creepier then when a guy who you don't really know declares love to you. Especially when he wrote something as sweet as that, because it just makes it even more awkward.

But if you talk to her sometimes, or if you're friends, do you think she might already have a slight clue that you like her? Because its also a bit awkward when someone who you never expected to declares love to you and you had no idea they liked you.

And last of all, you have to consider what her friends are like. If you're going to put it in her locker, is there any chance that one of her friends might get hold of you're declaration of love and well, read it before she does and then embarrass the hell out of you AND her? Because if they are like that, and trust me, some girls are, then you might wanna think of a better way to give it to her.

But yeah, give it a shot. Just don't come on too strong. And I hope everything I just said made sense.

Best of luck!

You're really infatuated with the girl... hahaha!

Anyway, great job!

I guess she'll like -scratch that- love your work, really fantastic!

Good luck!



-Louise

this is so adorable. totally melodramatic and, yeah sappy and cliche, but very sweet. I can really tell that you like this girl a lot.

the romantic sap in me is completely for this and really wants to know how it works out. the realist in me is thinking "what the hell are you thinking. don't do it. don't do it." I don't know which is winning. I'm a little afraid for you though. You don't want to turn her off by coming on too strong. she might not be ready to know about the extent and intensity of your feelings.

i'm only saying that because i've been on the receiving end of some intense declarations of love which i wasn't expecting and which consiquently made me want to take a shower and scrub myself with steel wool. you probably didn't need to know that, but be sure that you can handle her reaction (no matter what it is) if you go through with this.

good luck!

ciao, Rae