Reviews for Rainfall Hands
the.mad.hatter's.accomplice chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
i want to see this performed. it must be beautiful.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
You have such elegance in your work, it's so beautiful.

I envy your talent.
LostInMe chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Nicely written, with well thought-out concepts. I like the original way you describe things - "shells of melon bellies" and "mudslide of blood" are examples.

Just a question - you used Hindu-related words more than once in this poem. Is there a particular reason why?
drippingdreams chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Violet: Moon poetry means just what it sounds like it means - poetry about the moon (or that includes the moon).
Violet Marx chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
This is absolutely beautiful.

The imagery is just fantastic! It's little things, like rather than saying "cloudy nights" you say "cloud-choked nights, and "gazelle elbowed and bumblebee knuckled."

Things like that just make it a Maisha poem.

I could just go on and on, even though parts of it I don't understand, but I'll just say it's wonderful and I favorited it.

I'm excited to hear more!

-Violet Marx

P.S. What is this moon poetry you speak of?
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
i discovered you just

now by accident at just

in and am beyond glad i

did. while i think this

has a little bit of grit

in it, perhaps as you

say it's cos it's to be

belted out, not read.

but this is fantastic.