Reviews for imminent not
bipedalcooney chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Wonderfully written. I love the sense of being bloated that I get from this poem- great imagery! Keep writing!
greenforests chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
I loved this
Isca chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
"It quivers in its blood-sack for bonbons, bursting with cream." I took this in a completely sexual way, and thought it was a wonderful description of ectasy.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Love the descriptions at the end; food in poetry is incredible. I love the verb usage there, too - swells and bursting are two excellent, vibrant action words, and they really give you this sense of fullness from eating. Love that. Then there's prances and quivers - the joy and nervous anticipation upon seeing these things. Very nicely done. Keep writing! :)