Reviews for Cloud
Vernelley chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Oh... This is... very emotional...

I'm not really sure what else to say. It's amazing how much you can convey to a reader in just a handful of words.
K.M.Simpson chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Beautiful, described POEM. I like the way you described everything. I could picture it. Favourite line: Who knows, but until then, grab an umbrella.

-K. .
J.S. Hopkins chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Very very good, It really is how people feel sometimes. I've never been good at writing poetry, I do enjoy reading it. You have a wonderful gift thank you for sharing it with all of us.
Lee Daniel chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
You see, this is why I do not describe myself as a poet. People like you are the real deal, and it would insult true talents such as yourself to try and group myself amongst you. Really well done. This is short, but perfect. It captures the imagination and forces all of your readers to feel the pain dished out by the cloud in ample supply. There have been many times in my life that I have yearned for the umbrella and found none. Once again, this is a very great work of poetry. Bravo.