Reviews for i miss you on my couch
Isca chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
The sense of nostalgia and need for routine in the first stanza is very refreshing. "We all just want to change." This line in particular was very powerful and profound. The repetition of 'couch' imagery adds a very natural, relatable, everyday quality to the poem, which I liked. You might want to rephrase the third stanza, though; it's a bit awkward. Keep up the good work. :)
instant bliss chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
I like the phrasing of this poem, the way it runs together and doesn't always make linear sense, and I also really like the way you picked up on that small detail "i miss you on my couch". It makes the piece so real, and so human, and really quite powerful as a result.