WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE?

I feel in love with the first chapter about a while (LONG WHILE)

I think your a great while and i hope you start writing or updating because its so good!

You have GOT to continue this story! Ok, I know there are a lot of stories out there with this kind of plot but I seriously think you have the potential to make it original and something new.

Call me masochistic, but I liked the part where Will and Holly were arguing - especially the last part. It gives you some material to make your characters have more depth. From this initial chapter I've gathered that Will probably has commitment issues and maybe other personal stuff going on.

I'd love it if you decided to continue this story and show what happens between their relationship and Holly's pregnancy. I know Holly seems happy that she's having a baby, but really, who wants to raise a baby alone. And what about when she has morning sickness and back aches etc - I guess she's realise that it'd be nice to have someone there (enter Will, lol.)

So anyway, enough of me babbling on :) I like the direction of this story and I really hope you continue!

interesting start update soon

I don't know what to think of this story yet, but I'm curious. :)

Very very curious as to what is going to happen with this story. Are you planning on updating, or did you write the first chapter and give up? Really hoping that isnt the case by the way.

I hope you update soon...i'm curious to see what will happen with this story.