I sat here and read this whole story in one day... it was fantastic :)
I'm kind of obsessed with anything having to do with Greek mythology so finding this absolutely made my day. The twist at the end when Demeter came into the picture was genius... I'd spent the entire story wondering where she was, and for her to appear and drastically change practically the entire story was brilliant.
Again, I loved your story-great work!

wow! this is honestly INSANE! one of the best mythology stories ive ever read on this website! there is one thing that you should consider however; and that being to change your rating to M, perhaps? I feel that the violence would bother some people, such as Zach's demise. But other than that, THIS WAS INCREDIBLE. boom. on the ground. dead. i kinda want to print out your story, tape it to my teddy bear, and sleep with it.

Love the story so far! You did an awesome job of portraying the characters. I'm falling deeper and deeper into the minds and situations of Persephone and Hades. Wonderful! Awesome! *goes to read more*

Wow! Based on those grade, she's definitely not the sharpest tool in the shed. LOL! What an interesting concept you have here! Can't wait to read more!

I couldn't stop reading! This book is really fantastic!

An awesome story! I really enjoyed reading it. .

isn"t zeus the eldest

I may have already said this in a review, but I can't remember. You should do a a oneshot or a few chapters long sequel about Persephone and her pregnancy or after she has the child

Wow, this was such a great story! I'm just sad it ended...

The very first stories i read by you was 'Dancing With The Devil,' and it was amazing.

that little bit reminds me of a excerpt i read from one of gena showalters books. anyways it still seems interesting. i would love a small side story about hades and persephone and their kids. also another story about the gods would be lovely

O my holy Greek Gods it's done! I was waiting forever for the updates and then bam-wham, presto. Totally completed. Thank you for finishing this story and it was very entertaining. This made my day. :)

AMAZING! Again you have presented your readers with a great story. :-D keep up the great writing.

I AM SOOO PROUD OF YOU! YOU FINALLY FINISHED IT! YAY! READING IT OVER ONE MORE TIME! thanks for writing and editing :D

I was so excited to read this story, but most of the chapters aren't here, and I'm desperate. This is one of the best Hades story I've ever read. I beg someone to give xiMarionette the old story and xiMArionette to try to update something, I don't care if it's old or even newly created. But I just need more. Please D: