Reviews for Need
JessZD chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Lovely. Great work! ]
hannakhan chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
I really like this piece a lot, it is simple and short, yet you are able to say so much in such a less amount of words. When I read the first few lines, I though it would be contrived, but I like the direction you went with and it really showed me that it wasn't just another sappy poem. Good job.
lymli chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
it's heartbroken, I like the repetition of the body word, it makes the poem more passionate.