fantastic story. there were tears.

and I just wanna say,

VMARS FUCK YES!

Respect level: ALL THE WAY UP HERE.

What happened to Matt's dog? Anyways, awesome start and I can't wait to finish it!

i have to say this... you are a god this is one of the best stories i have evr read and i read a LOT of books, keep up the good work because you deffinatly have talent XD

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seriously awsome plot and story

great job

Epilogue yay! Lovely ending

I absolutly loved this. I read the whole thing in one sitting. One. It was crazy. But i loved it. yay!

Okay...so I just read that from start to finish within about 24 hours...with about 6 hours of sleep in between, and about 2 hours of errands. XD So basically, this story was awesome. Haha. And when I realized about 3/4 or the way through the story that Jay was 17 when he turned into a genie, I had to crack up, since Matt's 30 through most of the story. And then when Matt realized, I laughed more at his reaction. XD Anyway, you're a gifted writer. There were typos throughout (and at some times it seemed like there was a word missing at the end or middle of a sentence), but considering how long the story was and all, that's really to be expected, if you don't have more than a content beta. And really, who am I to criticize? I may be pretty good with grammar and spelling, but I'm not much of a writer...Anyway, great story, and I’ll keep an eye on your other stories, because I’d love to finish them where they’re complete (I’ve got this thing about reading incomplete stories. I can’t stand the suspense! That, and a lot of authors never finish their work, so I end up left hanging…). I’d really like to read that story about Aaron. lol He’s an interesting character. Now, I will stop rambling. Ha.

This is sweet! :)

I just wanna say, when my teacher yells at me for falling asleep in class tomorrow (well technically today seeing as its past midnight) im blaming it on this story. Also i have to say i am loving this story so far. Im terribly worried about Jay right now, But the evil that is sleep is calling me so im gonna have to wait until after school to finish reading.

It got slow in the middle when you where having a bit of a writers block problem, but I really like this story! You did it well. Congratulations on finishing.

I think you should post little mini-stories about Matt and Jay's domestic life.

Hello! I just read your entire story in one sitting! I absolutley loved it! Your writing style is unique and fantastic to read. I loved the personalities of the characters and how you developed the story. I can't wait to read more of your writing!

I liked this. Cute. Paige was not my fav mostly because it was hard to imagine her as anything other than a teenager. I loved everyone else though.

aw! that was a nice read.

What the Hell? 0.0 lol