Reviews for Friday of Magic
Poptart Guava King chapter 5 . 5/31/2009
KYA! WOO! Gaia rox!

and what happened to the puppy? did they leave her in san fran to die?
Keona Raynalise chapter 7 . 5/30/2009
WOW LOVE IT! cant WAIT 4 de next chapter! this is the BEST STORY EVER! i love the genie idea! GREAT WRITER UPDATE SON!
clarice01 chapter 7 . 5/23/2009
I really like your story so far. Sometimes a sentince doesn't quite make sence, but they are few enough to ignore. I have just one question, how can Jay use his powers in this chaper, but they weren't working in the last one? Did I miss something, or did it just go away as he woke up?
plumblossom chapter 7 . 5/21/2009
Jay seems to have forgotten that he can't do magic . . .
Isamara chapter 7 . 5/16/2009
OMG! I LOVE this story!

PLEASE keep writing, please!
JtheChosen1 chapter 7 . 5/15/2009
This was great, but I'm curious as to more behind the random shooter...what was the exact reasoning behind him?

Other than that, AWESOME WORK!
Twelfth Night chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
I didn't see that ending coming.
mandrake-o chapter 6 . 5/12/2009
I love this story. I can't believe you ended this chapter with a dramatic cliffhanger!

) Mandraco.
KartoonKrazy chapter 5 . 5/10/2009
Paige. She's just the right amount of hyper.

I like this story a lot. Matt kind of annoys me still, but he's alright. Also, Paige Crystal. Yes. Do it.
Catatonic Seiory chapter 5 . 4/24/2009
This is really good. I like how you write and how you switch from first person POV to third. I'm surprised there aren't many other reviews, and this felt review worthy so I thought I would drop a note. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter! ;)
JtheChosen1 chapter 5 . 4/21/2009
Awesome work here! And I was wondering about the puppy too! Lol, a pile of bones, how sad!
JtheChosen1 chapter 4 . 4/20/2009
awesome story so far! really dead on!
Tonberry Surprise chapter 4 . 4/20/2009
Oh, I really like this story :D

And the kiss didn't out of place at all; I thought it was a perfect way to end the chapter.

Can't wait till you update~
mandrake-o chapter 4 . 4/7/2009
Hmm... interesting. I like this story.

) Mandraco.
lpluver chapter 4 . 4/6/2009
yay first kiss! You are a really talented writer, so keep posting those chapters :) I really like the story line and the characters. Please update soon and keep up with the excellent work!

-lpluver
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