Reviews for Friday of Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() KYA! WOO! Gaia rox! and what happened to the puppy? did they leave her in san fran to die? |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW LOVE IT! cant WAIT 4 de next chapter! this is the BEST STORY EVER! i love the genie idea! GREAT WRITER UPDATE SON! |
![]() ![]() I really like your story so far. Sometimes a sentince doesn't quite make sence, but they are few enough to ignore. I have just one question, how can Jay use his powers in this chaper, but they weren't working in the last one? Did I miss something, or did it just go away as he woke up? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jay seems to have forgotten that he can't do magic . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I LOVE this story! PLEASE keep writing, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great, but I'm curious as to more behind the random shooter...what was the exact reasoning behind him? Other than that, AWESOME WORK! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't see that ending coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I can't believe you ended this chapter with a dramatic cliffhanger! ) Mandraco. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Paige. She's just the right amount of hyper. I like this story a lot. Matt kind of annoys me still, but he's alright. Also, Paige Crystal. Yes. Do it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. I like how you write and how you switch from first person POV to third. I'm surprised there aren't many other reviews, and this felt review worthy so I thought I would drop a note. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work here! And I was wondering about the puppy too! Lol, a pile of bones, how sad! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story so far! really dead on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I really like this story :D And the kiss didn't out of place at all; I thought it was a perfect way to end the chapter. Can't wait till you update~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... interesting. I like this story. ) Mandraco. |
![]() ![]() yay first kiss! You are a really talented writer, so keep posting those chapters :) I really like the story line and the characters. Please update soon and keep up with the excellent work! -lpluver |