Reviews for Glass Slippers
SpawnMeister666 chapter 29 . 6/28/2009
Great ending!

I like the way you twisted this at the end. Not sure if I liked the characters of Ella or Georgina, but of course that's the whole point!

A well written take on a story that had seemingly been done to death, yet you found a slightly new angle to explore so top marks.

Spawny
SpawnMeister666 chapter 27 . 6/20/2009
And so we come towards the conclusion. Is Ella going to be happy with her life as a queen? Or is she going to grow bored with sitting and waving at people?...

I sense one final twist before the end of the tale...

Spawny
SpawnMeister666 chapter 26 . 6/15/2009
I like the way that things have developed in this tale...

We have the wicked step-mother, which is, of course, a given in this type of tale...

We have the 'fairy godmother' which is really just a jealous relative playing one-upmanship...

And we have the beautiful heroine of the story, who is revealed as a headstrung, but still, ultimately, spoiled brat...

Clearly, the moral of this story is that all women are untrustworthy liars!

Spawny
SpawnMeister666 chapter 23 . 6/2/2009
A good update, and I for one am glad to see you are keeping going with this tale. Also nice to see a longer chapter after the last couple...

Keep up the good work!

Spawny
SpawnMeister666 chapter 21 . 5/1/2009
These last two chapters are very short. I'm guessing there may be some apathy on your part thinking that you're writing for a non-existent audience, which is a big shame.

I like this tale a lot, and hope to see longer chapters coming along soon.

Spawny
SpawnMeister666 chapter 19 . 5/1/2009
This chapter could do with some editing, as there are a number of typos and some pretty poor grammar in places.

It appears that I'm the only person reading this tale, which is a shame, as it's a good, well written (mostly) take on an old tale.

Spawny
SpawnMeister666 chapter 16 . 3/23/2009
This is coming along well. I really like the way the characters have been developed so far, along the traditional lines but with a definately more readable style than the original tale...

Spawny