Reviews for The Disconnect
RandomUser674 chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
I can relate to the entire poem.

"out of place in every place" Great use of contrast, in and out of places at the same time. The word place has different meanings in this line. Shakespeare used this same technique in the Prologue to Romeo and Juliet. "Civil blood makes civil hands unclean."

"Is this my forever?" Great intro!

I can list every line and say how awesome they are, but then this review would be way too long. Outstanding poem!
HoldingRunaways chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
I love this! Absolutely amazing. I can relate greatly. Adding to Favs!