Reviews for To America
three oh five chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
dude that's not america, that's everywhere.

"Welcome to where rainbows

are shot for holding hands"

I liked those lines, it's a clever way of putting it.
x.Miss.Twiztid.x chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
I absolutely love this.

It has such an intense, in-your-face feeling of sadness and anger. It's a shame to think about what this country has become. Your poem encapsulates it perfectly.

And your imagery and metaphors blew me away.

Yep, this is definitely going on my favorites list.
4NeverAfter chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Very well spoken I must say. I love the metaphores you used and the imagery! I love how you used the stars shining and then led me down to realize that you where talking about people. . Ditsy me didn't know that until the greesy hair part tee hee. But again absolutely loved it. very well put together!