|Reviews for Expand & Contract|
| 4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
everyone has good in them somewhere, and if they can't see yours, they can go fuck themselves.
| Isca chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
"My chest is expanding at an exponential rate." Frightening imagery. It reminds me of something Mary Shelley would write. :)
You're a good person. Forget about the idiots in this world.
| pixy dust and fairytales chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Great poem. Very strong, and just...raw and open. And you're right...people...they suck. A lot, ha.
| Fizzzeee chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
| deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
:( I am not sure who this 'everybody' person is who hates you, but whoever it is he/she is an idiot ;) That feeling though... I know it well. Theres nothing for it but to grin and bear it, cuz the farther you let it take you, the harder it is to get back. You capture that feeling incredibly well in your poem. I particularly liked the line "my chest is expanding at an exponential rate, ripping open & allowing my frustrations to escape" due to that very aspect. That is the perfect way to explain it. And the way it all revolves around the central theme, just beautiful.