Reviews for Laila and Me
mayliegh-star chapter 19 . 2/22/2010
i'm so glad you updated. this is, without a doubt, my favorite story of . publish this. i will buy it. you will be my new francesca lia block.
A Faded Whisper chapter 18 . 8/29/2009
I really love this story. I am like your typical parents dream child, always striving to do the right thing and be absolutely perfect in everyway, never taking a risk because I might get in trouble. This story to be is symbolic of the other people in the world, the ones who aren't perfect, smoke, do drugs and take risks. Although im not like that I kind of admire people with guts and free will, not tied down by the expectations they have already set for themselves, the ones that aren't like me, not so into trying to attain perfection their whole lives, I envy the way they think and what adventures they accomplish in life, things like travel as in this story, something that sounds so much fun yet so out of character for me that id never do it. So this piece of writing for me is like a window into their world, and I thoroughly enjoy every word.

Imminent Paradox chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Ooh, this is a very nice first chapter! I think Laila sounds pretty cool- so different and unique. I love those kind of characters :). I think this is well-written, too. It's really caught my attention :)

I really want to read more now, but I'm not sure if I have time. So don't be surprised if you get another random review from me sometime! Because I want to know what happens!
Waffle Rocket chapter 16 . 6/19/2009
I can't believe how little feedback this has gotten.

This is probably one of my new favourite fiction works here on fictionpress. I love the description, I love the idea, it's great. However, one thing I would look out for: Spelling and grammar at times. Reread things a few times, there's always something to fix. Otherwise, I love the story. It's very obvious that you do a lot of reading and work hard at writing.

I cannot remember the chapter, but you said there was a reference to a book, with the thing about the bird and the egg that was the world. Could you, by chance, let me know what the book was? Because I've been making lists of books to read, and I've already gotten a lot of good ideas about where to start simply from reading this.

That was almost totally unrelated, I'm sorry.

I can't wait to see what happens next. I love the characters: Laila is probably my favourite thus far. Sometimes I wonder what's going through her head-however, Mary's quite interesting to read, so I'm completely satisfied. It's nice to see the changes she's made in her life and in her mind.

Really great job on this, keep up the great work.
The Donkey's Marshmallow chapter 14 . 6/1/2009
Ah, that was definitely worth reading. Very nice job on the descriptions!
mayliegh-star chapter 13 . 5/27/2009
this story is freaking awesome. i read the first 6 chapters or so before work, and all day all i could think about was getting home to read the rest. keep up the great work!
xPainxTruthxBeautyxHeartbreakx chapter 12 . 5/11/2009
I still really love this :):)

it just gets better and better

dont stop writing it yeah?

I loved the beginning bit the most when Laila's referring to songs and litretature and when she talks about religion.

its kind what I believe about religion too :)
A Faded Whisper chapter 11 . 5/6/2009
You know how the sun glistens off the newly fallen snow in the winter. That picture, just gives so much bliss, because it's so perfect. So perfect that you don't dare to step in it. That's like this story... I love it, and because I love it so much, and it seems so amazing to me, I don't want to comment because like that one single footprint, a comment so flawed as one I would leave ruins the nearly perfect story already here. (and maybe also because I couldn't find the answer xD)

literati papier chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
read this absolutely!:)
xPainxTruthxBeautyxHeartbreakx chapter 9 . 4/27/2009
wow, i really want to read the next chapter :) i forgot how much i loved it :D
A Faded Whisper chapter 8 . 4/16/2009
I actually really enjoyed that chapter. The way you gave detail reminded me of my own writing. Ending with lyrics gives the readers sonething to hang on to, to think about. Well done!
Eion Gibbs chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
It's going well, congratulations... It's a pleasure to read.
xPainxTruthxBeautyxHeartbreakx chapter 5 . 3/9/2009
Ooh that Hannah's a bitch lol. Asher seemed slightly interesting, its a good chapter as always :)

Update when ya can.
A Faded Whisper chapter 4 . 3/3/2009
I love the storyline!


xPainxTruthxBeautyxHeartbreakx chapter 4 . 3/3/2009
Oh, you've mixed some things in! Like the monkey and the aunt book, haha.

That would be an awesome way to live. If you were like that I'd want you to be my aunt!

Update whenever!

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